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Dennis Morgan
It was graded with the footnotes in Adobe Acrobat PDF format. Both files are here.
Hello Michael,
Here are my findings regarding the directives of this discussion assignment.
Questions and Answers
1.) Is the story about a historical event or person? If yes, who is the historical
person or what is the event?
Yes, the story is about the Russo-Finnish War, a historical event.
2.) Does the story include at least, 1250 words?
I am unable to count the words in the story without the proper tool. However, the story is lengthy and has much more than 1250 words.
3.) Has the author created visual descriptions and characters? Give an example.
Yes, the author has created visual descriptions and characters. For example, “On the barren snow terrain, two forces marched with a rifle in hand. One side, the Red Army, wore light brown coats and black boots.”
4.) Does the story have 5 sources on the reference page? How many sources are there?
The story has more than 5 sources on its reference page.
5.) Does the story have at least 20 footnote examples? How many footnotes are there?
There are 23 footnotes attached to the story.
6.) Is there a beginning, middle, and end to the story? If not, what is missing?
Yes, the story has a beginning (the march of the Red Army), a middle (the battle and medical treatment), and an end (the discovery of Igor’s body).
7.) Does the story include a plot and dramatic structure? Please give a brief summary of the plot.
The plot involves a soldier named Mikhail Volkov who is part of the Red Army during the Russo-Finnish War. The story follows his experiences during a battle, his injury, and the subsequent treatment. The dramatic structure includes exposition (introduction of Mikhail and the setting), rising action (the battle), climax (Mikhail’s injury), falling action (treatment of the injury), and resolution (discovery of Igor’s body).
8.) Does the story include detailed information? Give an example of a detailed sentence.
Yes, the story includes detailed information. For example, “He grabbed the silver knob on the side of the carbine. Quickly, he turned it upwards and pulled it back. The sniper started to point the rifle directly at him. He grabbed the ammunition and shoved it into the carbine.”.
9.) Does the story include dialogue?
Yes, the story includes dialogue between characters, such as between Mikhail and Larisa.
10.) Is the story double-spaced with size 12 font?
I cannot determine if the story is double-spaced with size 12 font based on the provided text.
11.) Do you see any grammar or spelling errors? If yes, please give a few examples of these errors.
The story was well-written with no obvious errors. I do not have a premium plan on Grammarly like unlimited word character usage, which would be needed for the number of characters and words to this story.
Hello Kerri,
Here are my findings regarding the directives of this discussion assignment.
Questions and Answers
Is the story about a historical event or person? If yes, who is the historical person, or what is the event?
Yes, the story is about the 9/11 attacks, a historical event.
Does the story include at least, 1250 words?
The story has more than 1250 words.
Has the author created visual descriptions and characters? Give an example.
Yes, the author has created visual descriptions and characters. For example, “A hole in the side of the north tower, there was fire and smoke everywhere. It looked as though someone took a knife and sliced the tower.”
Does the essay have 5 sources on the reference page? How many sources are there?
Yes, the essay includes 5 sources on the reference page.
Does the essay have at least 20 footnote examples? How many footnotes are there?
There are 20 footnotes in the essay.
Is there a beginning, middle, and end to the story? If not, what is missing?
Yes, the story has a beginning (the regular workday), a middle (the announcement to evacuate and the ensuing chaos), and an end (the protagonist’s escape and reflection on the events).
Does the story include a plot and dramatic structure? Please give a brief summary of the plot.
The plot involves a character named Jennifer who is working in the World Trade Center during the 9/11 attacks. The story follows her experiences during the evacuation, her encounter with Raymond, and her eventual escape.
Does the story include detailed information? Give an example of a detailed sentence.
Yes, the story includes detailed information. For example, “That is when it happened, a rumbling sound and this violent shaking. The walls and handrails breaking and then this gust of dust and heat wave, you could just smell the jet fuel.”
Does the story include dialogue?
Yes, the story includes dialogue between characters, such as between Jennifer and Raymond.
Is the story double-spaced with size 12 font?
The spacing appears to be 1.5 spacing instead of double-spacing. The reference page sources were not in proper APA format as well.
Do you see any grammar or spelling errors? If yes, please give a few examples of these errors.
The story does not reveal any typos from my take of it, I see no grammar or spelling errors. The story is written with no obvious errors